I made this because I heard the song and thought, why not? It may be cringy , but I am ok with that. I think the flow is off or something? I feel like something is off or not quite right? Maybe because I haven't made an AMV quite like this one before? I don't know. Any feedback would be helpful.
https://youtu.be/dy8oNIoYSk4
Thanks in advance.
STG
Patema AMV WIP
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caboose8
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Re: Patema AMV WIP
I think the first bit of the video might seem a bit slow to start but halfway through the video it felt like you were more comfortable. Sometimes for certain edits it feels like getting the first portion is the hardest and I will redo certain areas at the beginning because of it. fyi this is my old account (Legato2400)
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sharktoothgoosie
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Re: Patema AMV WIP
Legato2400!! Hey! Thanks for replying.caboose8 wrote: ↑Sun May 02, 2021 6:31 pmI think the first bit of the video might seem a bit slow to start but halfway through the video it felt like you were more comfortable. Sometimes for certain edits it feels like getting the first portion is the hardest and I will redo certain areas at the beginning because of it. fyi this is my old account (Legato2400)
The song is sort of more mellow in the beginning, so I was trying to "match the mood". Once the whole reverse gravity is revealed it picks up, but I also don't want to lose any of the sort of "build up" ?? I don't know if I conveyed that well. It's probably worth a second draft for sure. I will keep your comments in mind as I think about reworking it.
Thanks for your advice!! Much appreciated.
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Re: Patema AMV WIP
Video deleted?
Do you have a new WIP of it? Or are you taking a break from this one?
Do you have a new WIP of it? Or are you taking a break from this one?